tFSers own poems/lyrics

[indie]

Since I didn't find a thread like this I thought I'd start one

I didn't exactly know where to put this so I putted it here.. Please mods move this if you think it's in wrong section

I write for fun.

here's one of my poem which doesn't have a name. I mostly write in Finnish and I'm not so good in english so..


All I need is a one shot
to blow this entire world up
and now I need two guns
so your momma can say oh my

[Moda_junkie]

Okay here's mine.. I named it "Hello"

Hello Hello,
Ιt's me again
Help me off this pain
Listen to me one more time
I know I’ve done nothing right
Save me from this vulgar trap
To see the light and not be sad

Hello Hello
Help me i beg
To our love again I’ll never bet
I want to see the sun again
A sunshine through the rain
Here i am.. I pray.

Hello Hello
My soulless body's torn..
On the seashore by the dawn
Please i beg
Save me from the end...

Andrew.

[Tourni]

I even suck at making comments on tFS; I doubt I would be able to write a poem from scratch...

[AlexN]

Good idea for a thread.

You can hear an unfinished clip of this here.

It Hurts Me More Than It Hurts You

(you’re gone…)

come summer you’ll be gone
come fall i will be too
(what is your life without her?)
what is my life without you?
(you’re gone…)
what is my life without you?

(you’re gone…)

come fall you will return
a week before i have to leave
then we’ll both be living alone
i’ll dream of you and cry and grieve
(the way i do now though you’re not yet gone)
maybe i’m just naïve
but i never would have thought
i’d be the one to leave
(you’re gone…)
and i don’t know what i’ll do
(i’m afraid of what i’ll do
what is your life without her?)
what is my life without you?

i want to see your scar
and hold you in my arms
and pray you’ll never get sick again

you don’t know how much i love you
cause i can’t bring myself to tell you
and it hurts me more than it hurts you

[strawberry daiquiri]

Oh chocococolate -
it's you.

[MulletProof]

[iperlchen]

I'll call Devendra if he wants to work with you.

[seraphelle]

Originally Posted by strawberry daiquiri

Oh chocococolate -
it's you.

[PrinceOfCats]

Originally Posted by strawberry daiquiri

Oh chocococolate -
it's you.

Where for art thou...

[XratedPaperDoll]

The last of my teen agnst thank god.

Plastic wrapped
Virgin eyes
Surrounded by styrofoam packaging peanuts
Bright red
Sugar lips
Hair dyed black to go with
The ring that shows my mood
Long brown
Dirty hair
With spots of pink
Leftover from an unforgving childhood
If I ask to be fed
Feed me music threw a straw
Blood flows vigiorsly
Threw my once stiched up palms
It emptys into puddles
That spell out the words
HELP I wanna go home
But I don't mean it
I'd rather be abused
Than used for nothing
And then left out to cry
Momma doesn't like it
Momma doesn't like to stain the rugs
Well momma I love you too
Maybe I scream at you
But I can't help it
I'm an idiot remember?
Lock me in a box
Don't forget to throw away the key
Give it to Him
Maybe he'd wanna save me
When he gets a chance to open his eyes
Like everyone else wanted to
But you didn't give them one f***ing chance
I want you to know I hate you
For everything you are
Even though you are nothing
And I'll scream at you
Untill my eyes turn blue
You cannot be the death of me
This cannot be the last you hear

[indie]

but he said

see you soon
it's the rough guide to the world
someone is writing your way out
take a chance and flip your head around
you might see something
and someones eraser will work again
flip your head around
kiss your michaels back
listen to those great guitar solos
ba-da-buh-da

~

Does this sound like an marilyn manson-esque lyric to you because it's been commentet as one but I've never paid attention to his lyrics..

talking about teen angst..


they are flying away without me

The moths flied away
and left me here
with immortal soul of sadness

and if I end it now
it would be endless suicide
of something beautiful>


Hell-o-ween

it's time to love hate cos it's feeding your back
it's time to hate love cos it's unchaining your heart
and seeing everything what's not in sight
and winning everything what's made to fight

and she sees everything that's not in sight
and she wins everything that was made to fight

I know some things
(she knows some things)
that was not meant to understand
see the love,
the love goes away

(and I just love you bitch
I just hope you weren't there)>

[TheSoCalledPrep]

i love Alex's song...

[umberg]

i shall revive this thread!

You are just so dark
So that when you have light parts
They shine so strangely
Like one firework every 3 hours
And then you are so dark
And I go quiet

So I just sit around waiting for you to get a little light
So that I can see it sometimes
And maybe sometimes when there is light
You look at me
And you really see who I am
And how much light I have
But then you look at me blankly again

And you just don’t care about you
But you care about me
And I care about you and me
So I have 2 lots of caring
And you have 1 only
And it’s not enough

Because if I fall somewhere
Then you have no lots left
And then you will go dark for always
And I will really know it



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Narcotics seem to be a hiding place
No one can see you so clearly
When you’re so high in space

Dark dark things
Are hidden by your wings
And every little freckle
Is a sparkling veil of stars
Drugs can help you run
But not very far

We pretend you didn’t take them
When your doing things to me
You make me feel good
You make me feel free

Your heart is truly racing
I pretend is because of me
But all those drugs you’re taking
Make you buzzy like a bee

Making honey with me

[Cliveages]

i made these poems just last june; dedicated to Ruslana and her mom..
i posted them on her thread, i'm just tranferring the poems here...


Ruslana (R.I.P)

A girl was born on Earth,
with sparkling eyes, a deep heart and timeless beauty.
You can see the future in her smile,
She had a fairytale life.

A girl became a woman,
A woman who became vulnerable.
She feels love like there's no tomorrow,
then suddenly she feels pain and sorrow.

A woman became an Angel,
--imagine an Angel who flies in her own wings.
You said, your dream is to fly,
but the sun darkened when you tried.
and now, you truly are flying,
with the birds in the sky,
and now, we look up to you and cry.

I hate it, really hate it,
when somebody's gone without saying goodbye,
But you know what are waiting for you beyond those clouds,
Love and Peace,
Take them, they are all yours...

*Clive*

[Cliveages]

...this poem is for Ruslana's Mother

"You loved your daughter from the moment she opened her eyes,
until the moment she decided to closed them."
We might not feel what you really feel...
...the pain and sorrow of loosing a girl who carries your own blood.

You are in a deep grief,
knowing that you will never see her again,
but she will stay in your heart, in your mind.
"Don't cry because it's over",
Smile because she came into your life.

Nothing is permanent in this world,
This world that's sometimes' cruel, sometimes' gentle.
It's life,-- we are born, we live and we die.
Maybe it's just time to let her go,
Time to give back the life that she borrowed,
Back into the arms of our father,
but remember, She'll always be your baby,
and You will always be her Mother...

*Clive*